Friday, October 16, 2009

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Rating: ★5.0

beckon me you,
with arms streatched with love.
didn't you see me,
my heart!
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ritty patnaik
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . 19 October 2009

Love is a compromise in a relationship and I feel it needs work to survive. Your last stanza speaks of honesty and is so touching, as nothing is completely perfect and again love survives. Beautifully written Ritty. 10 love Karin

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