Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Giving In Comments

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Please, please, don't look at me like that
There's enough to have to deal with,
it's enough to drive me mad
Please, though, I beg of you
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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

'You're hanging me on the line of clothes To dry outside, for others to behold' strong meaningful lines...an excellent poem that speaks heart out... ten for you Mo...

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Bernard Ceasar 18 September 2008

...like so many other poems posted by the many great poets of this site-this poem took me on a journey-a person sitting in church being preached to-condemned-for wrongdoing-by a preacher/pastor-someone with whom you confided-sharing your innermost secrets-then the preacher-who is also imperfect-turns and preaches to everyone-the secrets you shared with him-but at that moment, it seems as if you are the only one being preached to-being hanged on the clothes-line-for others to behold. Excellent piece! !

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