Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Giving Her Away Comments

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The ultimate affection overcame me on the day
I walked the walk of a fathers dreams, and gave my girl away
And tears of joy flowed from my eyes, and memories flooded back
Of childhood years, and growing up, and never looking back
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Ann Beard 06 October 2015

I really like this poem Phil, loss is hard in whatever form it takes. are you English, something in your diction tells me you may be. I was..... a long time ago. Ann

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