Thursday, January 28, 2016

Giving Away Time Comments

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Waking to a new morning, watching life rise and get
moving, people getting ready for or going to work,
taking their children to school, going shopping.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 31 January 2016

This is very much a Poem of the External World! It is packed with details of of ordinary life, the bustle and wonder of society in its purest form - that is, you don't dwell on the problems of urban life - another time, another poem can do that. This one is filled with the glitter of life but you close with a proviso about the neglect of the interior life.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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