$28 a kilo are limes
in the shop.
I'm givin' them away here,
where,
...
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I like 'givin' and 'em', so like Kipling Superb technique, which you might use more often.
This sounds like a very tasty drink. I like your use of 'em' which reminds me of Kipling's technique. I feel thirsty now.
A drink with mango and lime? Sounds really good! I drank some mango nectar just today. Still have some in the fridge. Might put some lime juice in it...
Beautifully written.....an admirable write!