Wednesday, May 22, 2019

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Given what it gives
Till notso to rain clouds cleaves,
Drops drip down tree leaves.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2019

Oh what a great haiku relating to nature! Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 May 2019

This was written a few years back, but in such sultry hot weather we already see dreams of rains. Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 May 2019

tears relieve sullen heart; cloudy tears come as rain drop to clean what taken

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 May 2019

Thanks for the poetic feedback, Mahtab Bangalee.

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