Given Up On You! ! Comments

im really feeling this poem its great as it explores lots of true feeling most may feel your good at this so keep it up ;)

Brandi, this piece personifies frustration... evident from beginning to end. Great write! ! Brian

Woah woah woah! ! ! Not feeling this whole 'anti-guy' thing here! ! ! : P Some of us are ok! *pouts* Honestly pet, you sound like you're better off without this guy. It sounds a deep relationship, but on your part only. It's impressive, though, that you can express your feelings on it. Liking it a lot. Dan x x x

Boys are so stupid! i'm sorry about you ex (i'm guessing? ?) but yeah, boys are so retarded, they don't know what they have untill they dont have it anymore!