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very very powerfull emotions here, please, suiside is a very serious emotion, even though throug out the poem, which is very good, remember there are always other options, the reader sences a feel of panic, and deception, and runing away from life seems to be one's only choice, at the time, it may look real, but you are very young and talented, I enjoy some of your writtings.... Keep up the good work, Bonnie