Monday, April 15, 2013

Give Up Or Stay Strong? Comments

Rating: 3.5

It hurts deep down inside,
to know that I have cried.

I've failed to stay strong,
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Kirstie Duekett
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 April 2013

poem lifted in a fast movement It hurts deep down inside, to know that I have cried. very message well penned well concept dear I read and read nice very nice deserve point thank you/read my poem Don't say or I am a poet thanks again

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Kirstie Duekett

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Perth Western Australia
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