My blood seeps out the veins
And drips off my finger tips
Whats left on me are the steigns
Or scars, darkness from eclipse;
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Great expression, and tone. Being free of all cares is the final stage of giving up.
The irony of being free of all cares is that you care about being worry free so you do everything to preserve being care free. but actually you are taking great care into this idea. great poem tho i believe that there is always 'a Drop of Hope' tho and life is always worth living for. i know you pretty well so i know ur not one to really give up