I asked Allah for strenght, that I might achieve I was so week, that i might learn humbly to obey.. I asked for health, that I might I might do better things...
I asked for riches, that I might be happy I was given poverty, that I might be wise... I ask for power, that I might have the praise of men
I was given weakness, that I might feel the need me Allah..
I asked for all things, that I might enjoy life I was given life, that I might enjoy all things..
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Very nice poem i loved it so much and the way that you wrote it (a ten) very good
A beautiful thanksgiving Sumaira Natural, spontaneous and true... keep writing
a beautiful poem..sure to touch the heart of every Muslim who reads it God bless u :)
Alliamdullillah for this superb invocation. Allah is the most Wise Who understands the needs of His creatures even when they are ignorant of them. Sumaira, May Allah (SWT) grant you more wisdom to promote more of His powerful signs and benevolence to mankind. I love this conciously invoked language of pious wits espoused by irony of senses. Kogbe ibrahim More ink to ur beautiful pen.
You make good use of contrast in this poem. Happy for you that you received eveerything you hoped for. Without hope there is no future.
I have read these things before, they are still at the heart of wisdom and the teachings of Allah. GW62
Inshallah! I can relate to this piece! Don't lose your hope and dreams fella! Allah hua akbar remember it everytime! Aslam malaicom!
Praise the Almighty a beautiful poem inshallah you will suceed in this life and the afterlife 10/10 from me
great feeling in cretive yet, powerful clan of words.... u r a blssd one, .......among all who most richly blessed!
great feeling in cretive yet, powerful clan of words.... u r a blssd one, .......among all who most richly blessed!
i love this poem... i think you will have good future... your subjecks are really important... great job... keep it up...
yeah everyone need to ask allah and we have to thanx Allah i like this poem, , it is nice kind of writing.. nice poem dear
goood i guess we should npt stop saying allah's names all the time
Dear very nicely constructed infact its based on beautiful theme who dare not to read this poem
awesome poem.. yeh we have to thanks to allah for everything he gave us.. love, beautiness, joys & that he brought us to live in this world.. <3333 i give u 10+++++++++..... for this poem..
Truly, Allah blesses with the right thing but only a few understand. LOVELY POEM and a GREAT WRITE.