Friday, August 17, 2018

Give Peacea Chance Comments

Rating: 4.2

Give Peace a Chance

It is cold very cold freezing temperatures
a mild drizzle
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me poet yeps poet 11 May 2021

THIS WAS A 5 POINT POEM THE MORE IT IS READ THE POINTS COME DOWN PL EXAMINE PH

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Savita Tyagi 19 February 2021

It's a pleasure to read this beautiful poem again. Its message as relevant today as was yesterday.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 September 2018

Man never gave a chance to the goddess of peace and he will never give it to her. I don't know wy we think war is a game. Wars give only adhoc solutions. An amazing poem written in love of peace.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 September 2018

Grateful thanks sir for ur lovely comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2018

Though it is very cold freezing temperature and mild drizzle yet she stands silently like a statue under the loneliest tree due to the shock and scare in her mind about the war and trouble. We get lifeless bodies and havoc only from war and nothing else. But we need peace ever. Let all live like friends kith and kin. The title of the poem 'Give Peace a Chance' is appropriated as per depiction. The way of presentation is unique and startling. A beautiful poem.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 August 2018

Thank you sir for ur kindest visit and unique comments they energiise my nerves hindi translation has also been posted

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 August 2018

title typo GIVE PEACE A CHANCE

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