Saturday, July 17, 2010

Give Peace A Chance Comments

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Little mouse oh, carefree mouse
You never get upset though
Zero is the flag of you stomach
Oh, the world is turbulent but you little one
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Gianni Hisao
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Ken E Hall 25 July 2010

You title is admirable and the little mouse can be used but the cat will not listen like a cloud that drifts...I take the gist of your poem the mouse is the many who have no say in our world of turbulance......regards

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