Friday, January 13, 2006

Give Me Comments

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Give me all you can give,
the love and joy you bring,
Give to me the melody of your voice
But don't give me materalistic things.
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La Tonya Davis
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Gregory Gunn 14 January 2006

Dear La Tonya, I have recently found this forum to share with others of a similar ilk and am quite glad to have done so. Lately, going through a bad patch. Personally, I prefer heavier type verses but this is surely special. Don't know if you care for Cyndi Lauper at all but consider these lines: Sometimes I'm afraid of the dark I can't find the light in my heart I can see my hand pushing away hard as I can But if I was fearless I could be your wreckless friend and if I was helpless could be the one comes rushing in Sometimes I'm afraid when you go...

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Reginald Goodridge 13 January 2006

Be sure to understand how being given is grand it is a responsibility having, keeping, with sincerity A burden at times no riddle, no rhymes giving and getting allowing and letting hold it, keep it respect its ways be sure you want it for more than just a day...

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