Wednesday, October 8, 2014

Give Me Your Life Comments

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Give me your life...
To like to love.
And not a piece of it to peep,
As if it's in a keyhole.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
honesty
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Tajudeen Shah 09 October 2014

seems this versification has something to do with real life experience of the poet. well, in anyws, the intended theme is well established, though some repetitions were not necessary; only my opinion. Keep penning. Good. God bless. Regards.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
Lawrence S. Pertillar
Lawrence S. Pertillar
Connecticut
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