Give Me Your Hand. Comments

A very succint poem, but short as well. I mean that kite and a soul has reached good height, all because of the shape of the poem, or the kite. Otherwise there are some words of commonality, and used in a typical manner, but a manner I am pleased with. I don't know what 'innocency' is? What is its difference to innocence? But at least I have flown a kite! Well done.

it's a nice poem abt peace love n harmony...i hope everyone gets the same message within thr hearts and make this world a happier place to live in. :)