Tuesday, March 19, 2013

Give Me Wings! Comments

Rating: 2.8

O life, to bear the burns
of tangible tongue,
how long will I
fight alone?
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Neela Nath Das
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Ken E Hall 01 April 2013

Sadly freedom is still a hope for many, your poem with wings puts many thoughts in the readers mind and your last lines answer it all...I think in OZ we take it for granted...regards

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Valsa George 27 March 2013

An intense longing to flee away from the world of harsh realities is poignantly expressed here! But escapism is not a solution for anything! To like and to be liked is a basic human urge which cannot be negated!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 22 March 2013

Give me wings / wings to fly away / from this dreary / land of disguised / foe, and feigned / wisdom....... These lines are aesthetics, which I love much.A great write.!

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