Monday, March 2, 2009

Give Me Wings. Comments

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The blue of the dusk
Clusters around these
Earthbound bones, lustily
Blows cold onto cold
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Fay Slimm
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those words seem to have given you one..lovely

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Kris Smith 02 March 2009

Come take me up to the spirit in the sky, remember that song 10 +++ Chris

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Herbert Nehrlich1 02 March 2009

Excelllent, you never disappoint Fay. There are few like you. Hxx

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Sandra Fowler 02 March 2009

You may be earthbound, but your beautiful blue poem definately has wings. Exceptional, Fay. Love, SandraX

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Tsira Goge 02 March 2009

It is remarkable poems... At you it will be obligatory wings, Fay...10.... Best wishes, tsira

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Ency Bearis 02 March 2009

I hope I got wings too, to see all my friends far away..a provoking verses lovely...10

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Tia Maria 02 March 2009

Oh if we could just take flight to the ones we love :) I loved this Fay

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Fiona Davidson 02 March 2009

Poignant and beautiful Fay...a wonderful read thank you...Fi 10++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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