Monday, May 21, 2012

Give Me The Power.(Senryu) Comments

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Neela Nath Das
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Heather Wilkins 02 June 2013

a sweet prayer asking for power.

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Rajendran Muthiah 08 June 2012

The brief haiku has a strong message.Pray to God for his support when life is baffled with problems.

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Indira Babbellapati 29 May 2012

when life goes wrong no worry! the wrong comes around and soon corrects itself hence, my friend nothing is wrong with life or the world right n wrong are limitations we impose on us others and the world!

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Eric Cockrell 24 May 2012

the courage to ask is the power!

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Captain Cur 22 May 2012

Faith in God is strength.

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Ramesh Rai 21 May 2012

Power is essential to do something, . May God bless you

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Hans Vr 21 May 2012

This is a beautiful Haiku-prayer. So many times thinks go wrong but we can be strong

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