Give Me The Opportunity To Grieve Your Absence Comments

Logic, meet life. Not a happy combination, at times. Great write - and a great insight into the devolution of love. I could add vivid autobiographical details to illustrate why I like this poem, but the flow of words and the insight is enough. And, what William Jackson said.

Good one Lawrence. This one is choice, a 10 for sure. It is the funniest zinger I have read this year. If I had a dime for every time I have heard, 'Someday I will be gone.... and you'll...' Yeah, well, don't let the door hit you on the way out is what I say to those that do that.