Friday, January 15, 2016

Give Me That Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to come to peace
Have a place to speak my mind
I want to come to peace
Be a part of humankind
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Melvina Germain
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Wes Vogler 16 January 2016

Good morning luv Here is a big warm hug. I hope you got Louise 2 I wouldn't know how to rate this except I think you are venting and that can be very good.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 January 2016

nice though i had posted comments couldn't see hence again ma'am nice poetry

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Melvina Germain 15 January 2016

Thank you.....

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 January 2016

if only you could reduce usage of peace so many times replace with similar kind of words what peace we all shall find u most of all as 'tis ur poetry all about peace

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Melvina Germain 15 January 2016

Thank you Poet for your suggestion, however I wanted to shout out Peace like shouting out the Blues. This is my newest and shortest SpokenWord piece, I feel good about it but I do appreciate yyour commens.....

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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