Saturday, November 3, 2012

Give Me Sunshine Comments

Rating: 3.5

A heaviness persists on my soul
like a foggy curtain in January morning.
Give me a little sunshine,
the sun refuses to rise in my sky
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Bharti Chandwani 03 October 2013

artistic writing..........good...

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 November 2012

Sad but d allegory n metaphor is commendable in d poem! Cheer up n kudos poetess. Do read mine too.

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