Sunday, September 4, 2022

Give Me Sunshine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Give me the sun, I'll be radiant in shine.
Give me the moon, I'll be brilliant in lit.
Give me your smile, let the blossom of my heart bloom;
Let your arms in loving embrace open;
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Stephen Olufemi Omolara
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Nosheen Irfan 05 September 2022

Great love poem. Nice use of figurative language!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 04 September 2022

superbly expressed within positive mode; I enjoyed your poetic gist

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Stephen Olufemi Omolara

Stephen Olufemi Omolara

Ode-Aye, Ondo State, Nigeria
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