Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Give Me Pain Comments

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I have lost the hands
Which used to hold me tight
One loss more
Will be all right
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Abdul Wahab
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Rishit Desai 18 June 2012

A completely different perspective on pain - done very well.

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wow.. perfect combo of words and feelings..nyc work..

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 June 2012

Pain is the cruel feeling. If we do not feel the pain, we may not feel the pleasure as well! Nice poem!

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