Thursday, July 13, 2006

~~~give Me One More Week~~~ Comments

Rating: 3.1

Baby, I've been drifting away
This isn't some game to play
I'm scared out of my mind
Everything inside of me
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 September 2006

One more week you got....a whole lifetime ahead ofyou is also on itys way...trust me, Kris...Love this work of yours, especially the last 5 pieces.You bring new mean ing to 'AWESOME WORK'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR/FRANK/frankster

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***** ********* 13 July 2006

Kristin, you are such a brave and special person, of course he will grant any wish you request. Far more infact, you ask for so little. This poem is one of the strongest and most inspired pieces of writing I have ever had the misfortune to read, It made my heart weep. You must never give up, we your fellow poets here at PH aren't, we are right with you, holding your hand. You need to try and take your mind away from the pain somehow, write as David says, just keep writing, thinking of the good things in your life, take all love that comes and try and relax. Thinkiing of you Tai

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Ashish R 13 July 2006

beautiful........dont give up on ur hopes dude.This life is juz too beautiful to give up on.

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David Darbyshire 13 July 2006

Hi Kristin, sieze the day, ever one, write some lettters, like your poems, send them to the loved ones, thats a nice thing to do. Hope is all what we have, so don't give up.....................................Loven Kisses dave xxx

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LISTEN HERE KRISMAEL...PRAYERS DO WORK, OR ELSE I WOULD NOT BE HERE WRITIN' THIS NOTE TO YA...I LOVETHE POEM, UNDERSTAND THE SENTIMENTS& KNOW THAT THE FIGHT IS YOURS...YOURS! ! IVE SEEN TOO MUCH TO BELIEVE THAT YOU AREN'T HERE TO PROVE FAITH, LOVE& GENUINE WILL CAN CHANGE THE COURSE OF THINGS...AND IT WILL...LOVE THE WRITE& KEEP THAT PEN PUMPIN.POETESS K PS....I THINK YOU'VE BEEN WATCHIN TOO MANY MOBY DICK TALES, DON/T YOU? CALL YOU ISHMAEL...HEH, HEH, HEH...FRANKSTER/FJR

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