Thursday, March 14, 2013

Give Me One Chance Comments

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The sun is peeping
thru the glass.
Telling, 'Get up
to all of us.'
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Neela Nath Das
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Valsa George 15 March 2013

This is a normal human reaction typified, especially if the dawn is cool and the sleep pleasant! !

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Babatunde Aremu 14 March 2013

Nobody wants to work but all wants to eat. For you to get anther chance, you need to wake up. I lke the use of imageries in this poem. Great write!

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