Saturday, March 23, 2019
Give Me More Apples Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Give me more apples
Bring me close to you
Hold me very tight
Let me have more bites
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7/21/2025 10:29:09 AM # 1.0.0
BONE OF MY BONE! Love inspired you to recast this timeworn parable. Your fresh humor makes it beautiful. To describe nighttime as " the black or blue" makes me think of bruises that are healed by love. A 10 for ecstatic originality. (I suggest changing the Stanza 3, Line 3 to " They must be ironically UNWISE" ;) .