Give Me Love Baby Give Me Love Comments

I find this also very entertaining, dear Asif. I kept on smiling while reading. It seems that even if you seemed not to labor so much in composing your lines, and yet you are able to give a very nice effect. Thanks for sharing.

Wow Awesome writing sir.

this wasn't bad, written well

Love demanded for in a hurry... I hope it last longer dn it was hurried. Good poem.

Sometimes love's impatience can be trying... good poem... Terry

it is the madness of love that rocks our world!

Straight to the point, like it.

Strong emotions in the realm of romantic love. It's a nice thread filled with a dynamic rhythm. Thanks for sharing it. All the best.

an enjoyable flow and strong emotion are what I can catch in your poem Really nice one Great job! ! ! !