Tuesday, June 17, 2014

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Do you remember last cascades of laughter
Till your breath couldn't take it anymore
Your seams almost opened belly ruptured
From standing you came down to floor!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lorraine Colon 18 June 2014

I'll bet you still have laughter in you - it never really goes away. We just find fewer reasons to laugh as we get older, we get too serious. But laughter is fun - and healthy - for us, so let's go for it! Great poem.

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Valsa George 17 June 2014

Life presents such comic situations when we are made to laugh our guts out....! If we capture such moments in our memory, they can give us a chuckle whenever recalled... A unique subject to celebrate in a poem! Enjoyed!

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