Wednesday, May 3, 2006

Give Me Back My Soul Comments

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Give me back my soul,
To another now I heed,
He calls to me so gently,
While in my ears you scream,
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Holly Heron
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Scarlet Red 16 August 2006

sounds like you're moving on with somebody yet still holding on to someone... really good-good poem.. can feel it... keep on writing holly =)

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Donny S 03 May 2006

Holly, this is a really good poem....keep up the good writing! Take care Dona

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