Saturday, February 27, 2010

Give Me A Sign Comments

Rating: 0.0

As I am seated down a tree
Feeling the wind passing with a breeze
I am a prisoner and not a man who is free
Surrounded with people who depend on me
...
Read full text

Felix Onyango
COMMENTS
Lady KrimZen 10 May 2010

This poem contains some really strong emotive language and great imagery. I really like how this poem depicts the hardships of living in these kinds of conditions - I am guessing this is what life is like for you - because for someone like myself, who is lucky to have a life where she is able to obain a good education and have enough money to be clothed and have food on the table (and often takes this for granted) is able to see just what life could be like through someone elses eyes. It is one of those poems that can cause the reader to wake up and realise just how lucky they are. A great read. Keep up the great work.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success