Sunday, December 8, 2013

Give Me A Life In You Comments

Rating: 4.4

Hold memories
To be in your life
Touch me
As if you feel it still
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2017

Dear Unwritten madam, this poem or ballad song which has been written in favour of farewell to your close ones or about missing one has significant influences on readers. I appreciate your way of presentation and eloquency of the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

The beauty of love! ! Nice work.

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Negar Gorji 26 November 2014

an alive and enjoyable poem. well done honey!

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Neela Nath Das 25 August 2014

Really, it happens to me.I love to stroll down the memory lane.I remember all faces of past, I miss them too much.Soul, this poem is fabulous! Again I'll come to read it.10++++

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Lyn Paul 23 August 2014

Promise my name to be written inside of you.- These are such beautiful words Soul. I have read these words before and now wondering if you have added the final touch. Music. Thank you Soul I hope you are still creating all of your magic

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A sweet and satisfying song with much meaning. Well done my friend!

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Marco Angelo 13 April 2014

This poem really inspired me to start writing a poem.. thanks for this beautiful work...

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Holly Jamestone 29 March 2014

This is a beautiful anthem of pain and longing and love and reminiscing masterfully written and so smoothly flowing. It is so relatable to the reader. LOVED it! -Holly Jamestone

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Marvin Brato 17 January 2014

Meaningful song... it's worth to be sing in public!

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Marvin Brato 10 January 2014

Full of loving sentiments...beautiful song of love!

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Bernard Snyder 02 January 2014

This is so awesome my friend! This has a musical tone. Great write!

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Valsa George 31 December 2013

Passionate proclamation of love in highly lyrical notes! ! Enjoyed this chorus song! I wish you all joy and cheer in the year ahead! May God bless you! !

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Jenie Franksay 27 December 2013

oh..... lovely write.... someone said right that ''memories have a default replay button''

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Ruby Mostazir 25 December 2013

i love this love song :)

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Yasmin Khan 22 December 2013

Love immortal in immortal souls so forever it stays, written beautifully dear Soul.

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Dinesan Madathil 17 December 2013

Excellent observations and logical statements have a charm here. Well written, dear Soul.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 December 2013

A beautiful song from your voice, let the music too flow along with it. Wonderful lyrics. Loved it.

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Noreen Carden 15 December 2013

A beautiful song from the heart beautifully written

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Lyn Paul 14 December 2013

Unbelievable words Soul, now with these great words you need to turn them into a song get some rythym and your voice. I hope your life is safe, your heart is smiling and you keep expressing your words to others

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Hazel Durham 12 December 2013

Brilliant write with amazing lines of a special person that was in your life!

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