Monday, July 28, 2014

Give Me A Drink Comments

Rating: 4.5

Before me thy beauty sparkles.

Woven into your long cool deliciousness bubbles rise
perfect in their minuteness.
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Diana Rosser
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Khairul Ahsan 04 August 2014

So wonderful! The last stanza is the icing on the cake! everybody loves to lick that!

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Bill Cantrell 28 July 2014

Quite a poem you have written, very passionate indeed.

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