Monday, February 29, 2016

Give Me A Call.......... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Call me from the far end
I am still waiting for your call
Time passed by, the wind went
birds born and flew,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 24 July 2020

A philosophical poem where you left the readers to interpret and enjoy.

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Sonali Ganguly 17 June 2017

really! such is the emotions when we wait for something for too long. well written Sir.

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Liza Sudina 01 March 2016

it's as you call someone who is far away on the other shore of the sea! nice poem!

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Aarzoo Mehek 29 February 2016

Life saving call, waiting with every bit of heart...beautiful expression of the wait...... Don't forget to tell us when you receive the call: D What are friends for, to share the joys of life :) 10+++

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Abhilasha Bhatt 29 February 2016

A call from love....A call for life......Wonderful philosophy........loved it......thank you for this wonderful sharing :)

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Romantic poem about the desire to hear your lover. Thank you for this great poem.

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Kelly Kurt 29 February 2016

Time dilates when anticipation is great

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2016

The call of life. Thanks for sharing.

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M. Asim Nehal

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