Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Give Me A Break! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Give me a break!
Just to do nothing
And to think nomore
And to stop listening
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Surayya Abbas
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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

May you have many illuminating moments in the landscapes of you mind. Poignant write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Akram Saqib 10 March 2009

great request for break.good words 10

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ata khan 12 February 2009

Really nice, naya andaaz hai, more please

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sumaira .....ir 05 February 2009

don't ask for it just do it........ a sensitively write poem really like it 10/10

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Amin Khan 26 January 2009

Yor are too innocent asking for such a break. Good desire possible in utopia....!

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Muizza Abbas 21 January 2009

Its a really nice poems and sometimes we really need a break from all aur sorrounding things and people........ to start life from new page........! Really trully speaking....... Good work

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Joseph Poewhit 21 January 2009

Gets to that point at times.

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