Give Me... Comments

If nothing else Give me the pain that consumes you On lonely nights, on dreary days. simply everything speaks this sublime poetry every word is nectarish

The fire of your gaze / The salt of your tears Exquisite expression. The mysticism running through the poem touches the reader's heart. A relationship is called for where there is no place for hypocrisy and dualism. Thanks for sharing a poem with a philosophical undertones. I want to have you in your entirety / Not just the pieces of you Give me the sunlight of your existence / The shade of your affection

A compelling and creative cry for a love that would not be satisfied with nothing less that the whole heart. Indeed, true love leaps above limits! Such a glowing and flowing passion that touches the heart. Well done my friend!

If nothing else Give me the pain that consumes you On lonely nights, on dreary days. Touching lines.

Love and passion! Give me what i want. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

Lovely expression of passionate feelings! The poem has an easy flow and unlaboured ease! An affirmation of a willingness to share the joys as well as sorrows of the loved one. A 10

sigh! we all crave fot that eternal emotional support and love. That never ending feeling of being loved, supported and cherished for life time. Sensitive emotions beautifully penned down.10+++