Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Give Me… Comments

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Give me life, so I can live
Give me love, so I can give
Give me happiness, so I can smile
Give me time, so I can stay awile
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Allyson Gordon
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Red Blooded Black Hearted 22 September 2008

I loved the repetition and the rhyming words. It flowed perfectly. Great work. Keep it up dude: -) Luv Rissa xXx oOo

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 March 2008

very interesting...........

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Allyson Gordon

Allyson Gordon

Adelaide
Allyson Gordon
Allyson Gordon
Adelaide
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