Sunday, April 7, 2013

Give Me... Comments

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Give me new morns with splendid sunshine
and clear blue skies
Give me fresh air with sweet whisperings of breeze
Give me quiet days sans the bustle of hectic crowds
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2018

It is a beautiful poem on Nature having thrilling expression with nice collocation. Saying 'Give me' a best hope to get splendid things and scenery from Nature has been astutely delineated. I appreciate this poem from the beginning line i, e Give me new morns with splendid sunshine and clear blue skies. Here it reveals the clean environment and the sanities of Nature that we need. Thanks a lot. Full vote.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 January 2015

Oh! Give me ‘Nature in all its primal sanities’ And souls with nicety of hearts, free of all affectations! Great poem.................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 31 October 2014

Oh what an amazing piece on nature.......Valsa......I really feel lively and refreshed reading this wonderful nature poem scripted so beautifully......10/10

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Joseph Anderson 29 April 2013

You have taken me to a wonder world of nature. A rare beauty here and right to my heart-precious

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Walterrean Salley 19 April 2013

A natural utopia. All lovely and desirable. We all want this.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 April 2013

What a wonderful poem, you took me to paradise with this special poem. Mankind destroys all this beauty, the next generation might not be able to witness beauty. Only poems like this one will tell them that we once had all these things on earth..I enjoyed reading the poem. Siya_! !

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The asking has its own reasons and the beneficiary poet is a representative of a clan of all of us craving for a plenty of the things desired. Unfortunately the benefactor Mother Nature has become very poor and she may struggle to meet your needs ever. A visual of the overflowing beauty still fascinates us and we remain enticed to its entities ever. A fine poem..

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Kavya . 12 April 2013

the real beauty of Mother Nature can be now felt only through your poem as the real beauty is lost thanks to mankind!

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Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu 12 April 2013

Hmmm....though we cant get it all, still dis poem brings back thoughts nt jst of wat was done by d people of old, but by we ourselves... Hats off Valsa...

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 April 2013

How much you lament this is impossible to get.we have already destroyed nature beyond recovery.nice write.liked it.

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Valerie Dohren 08 April 2013

So beautiful Valsa, wonderful descriptions of nature in all its glory. A great read.

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Neela Nath Das 08 April 2013

A wonderful poem on nature. A good prayer.Loved very much.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 April 2013

A marvellous poem oozing NATURE in all its alluring shades captures the heart! The last couplet is the crown which is captivating! As usual A BEAUTIFUL WRITE, VALSA!

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Shahzia Batool 08 April 2013

Valsa George...the brooding moment when you must have conceived this poem can be felt as so fertile...one can feel the desire of flight into the world which adorned the poems of The Romantic revival...this is the product of your heightened imagination blended together with poetic art.

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Kee Thampi 08 April 2013

Life is very precious...... We will be happy to read ....Give me fresh air with sweet whisperings of breeze Give me quiet days sans the bustle of hectic crowds each promising new wonders and joyous tidings Give me country sides with luxuriant vegetation and rich plantation......... Thanks for this write.... Let be happy and make others be with a smile

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