Monday, December 3, 2007

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You do not see my heart’s desire? ?
The others find it obvious.
To me, you matter more than worrying about you finding out.
I’d rather live the truth than tell a lie.
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Landrey
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Jonzo Bandwagoner 03 December 2007

Wow! Now that's the Landrey I know! You combine your artistic style with a fresh approach (I'm printing off the last line and nailing it to my wall) ... I love a poem that catches me off guard the way this one does. Awesome.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 December 2007

What a thoughtful, evocative piece! Well done!

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