Thursday, August 18, 2011

Give And Take Comments

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This is all I have left to give you.
The truth, hanging on a silver string.

I gave you all I had,
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Elizabeth Grace
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Emily Angel 19 August 2011

Betrayal is the worst thing that can happen to a human being! ! You have expressed the bitterness beautifully...Keep writting...

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Stefanie Fontker 18 August 2011

Like animals, there are humans so primal that they just take, and take. Such emotional words in this beautifully written poem.

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