Give And Take Comments

a good subject for PH poets..well done...10+++ But, if unconditionally One adopts The ability to give, Support and facilitate others Without expecting rewards Is bestowed with Inner contentment.

System are not what documents say.... They are habits of people, which they practice.... Have good habits and give good system to new generation....!

Message with guidance for a better life - wonderful. Unfortunately there will always be takers....thank G-D for the givers we have.Well written- Regards Cindy

what a great way to put a huge canvas through so few words..very very nice poem simple yet touching and... almost imposes self reflection

I don't know whether this is a good thing or a bad one but this poem kinda sounds essayish; D But I agree with your way of thinking though, giving is definitely something which should be enjoyed and not sulked over ;)

much true....packed with messages..........10+++ sebastine

Excellent observation and word choice…

Give and Take.....a great poem Surayya with a powerful message.

Hello Surayya, it's wise a word... remarkable a poem..10.... Best wishes, Tsira

I believe that you are a wise philosopher of some kind bestowing wisdom on those who read your words. This makes your words of more value than those of other poets and writers. I really love your presentations. You state an affliction and give guidance to a solution. Wonderful! GW62

The ability to give without expecting any reward is a lesson for all - 10

Very well said, and beautifully Thanks for sharing Surayya Ji

the message is loud and clear..A nice write

Brilliant piece of flowing thoughts, nice penning

Nice flow of thoughts Surayya, well done. Best, Jerry

I enjoyed the wisdom of the penning however more the practical natures of the adivice in that we all need to develop 'habits' of giving

what a very nice write and oh so true

I like how your poems are filled with truth. Very nice write! ! ! ! !

so true..if you are able to give without anything rewarding you... than you will be feeling fine

unconditional commitment towards others is the key to inner connectedness wonderful thoughts