# # Give A Child (My First Senryu) Comments

LIke this senryu my surprise that you have written one. I must explore further to see what otheer poetic forms you have used.

I like the senryu, and you have done it well. The simplicity of the poem and child endears =)

A brilliant senryu - the subject is also well chosen...Congratulations 10+++++

a child is not imprisoned to life...it's creativity and joy is boundless..hard to believe this your first senryu..beautiful

An excellent piece..

Such a perfect subject for this ancient poetic form. And penned with great authority too. (Can't believe this is your first Senryu!) Your poem reminds me of Pooh and his Pooh-sticks. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Pure enchantment. How well you understand the world of a child. Warm wishes, Sandra

This is simply beautiful. A child can create magic in their imagination. My Mother made my sister a fairy dress and when she got the wand, she said it would not work! My Mother said that it would in her imagination. An excellent first Senryu Sonya.

A wonderful first senryu - so few words, so many magical images. S :)

A child with a stick? ? ? Magic is bound to happen, dear.......whether black or white....i dont know.....

great little senryu, Sonya. nice image, very tight, every word in place.

Full of wonder, like a child's world. The artist retains innocence too and you have created your own magic.

good senryu Sonya...where did you get a stick? 10

A child, a stick so many scenerios, well versed 10 Lynda xx