Gitanjali Poem No-1 Comments

This poem is beautifully written and it gives me a lot of pleasure.100++++++++

ଜୀବନ ପାତ୍ର ମୋ ଶୁନ୍ୟ କରିତୁମେ ନୂତନ ଜୀବନ ଭରିଦିଅ ବାରବାର

ତୁମ ହସ୍ତର ଅମୃତ ପରଶେ ଅନ୍ତର ମୋଉଠେଉଛୁଳି ଫୁଟି ଉଠେ ତହିଁ ଅଜସ୍ର ଅବାକ ଆନନ୍ଦର କଳିl..It gives me immense pleasure to read fabulous pieces of Gitanjali..You have translated it immaculately! Thanks for sharing!

Thou hast made me endless, such is thy pleasure. This frail vessel thou emptiest again and again, and fillest it ever with fresh life. I don't know Odi but if it's a translation by Bharati Nayak, I believe it should be a great translation.

amrutamaya nischaya, madhuramaya