Girls Are Pleasant Showers Comments

we assure you grandpa we shall sing sweet songs, we shall dance like charming butterflies, we shall bloom like aromatic flowers, and we shall come to you like pleasant showers. great promises to the poet........ wonderful thinking on the thinking day.... love your poem dear Akhatar.. tony

Fairer Colors get fade when our thinking and emotions get fade.....Beautiful poem....thank you for sharing :)

With the beauty in them. Nice piece of work.