Sunday, June 16, 2013

Girls Are Helpless? Comments

Rating: 4.9

We cry
and try
then cry
and never try
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survi sharma
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Part 2. Contd… shun male chauvinism, get educated and earn a living of their own. Marriage and bearing children of the men who do not respect them, is not Life. There is a life outside. They have to find it and live it.

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I believe, girls have to stop crying. It is time they did. They have to move away from the male hierarchy,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Well envisioned poem so nicely presented.Girls are powerful but situation sometimes makes them helpless. An intensive poem I like most. Many thanks Survi, keep the ball rolling.- - - 10

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Vineet Chhikara 26 August 2013

ahh a nice topic i would say and agree with you that girls are just said to be worshiped but the reality lies somewhere else....

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Kinjal Sharma 08 August 2013

girls are the creator i agree poet

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Heather Wilkins 28 June 2013

sad reference to girls. great poem. everyone deserves respect.

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 June 2013

An excellent poem. As a fellow human being I can understand the pain and the anguish that grills us from within. If you find time read my latest posting entitled 'An Introspection' and post your comments.

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Indranil Bhaduri 22 June 2013

Splendidly written..could feel the pain..voices to be raised.

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Mohammad Skati 21 June 2013

It's a cry voice against injustice. Fairness is required. It's a nice and simple poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2013

Don't have to worship, just respect. No one should be in a helpless situation. Touching words.

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Lateef Jan Afridi 18 June 2013

Nice poem dear. Yes we should respect the girls and women and to keep this fact in our mind that if we are today alive in this world is just becoz of women. Nice written, touches the heart. Keep it up

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Lateef Jan Afridi 18 June 2013

Nice poem dear. Yes we should respect the girls and women and to keep this fact in our mind that if we are today alive in this world is just becoz of women. Nice written, touches the heart. Keep it up

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R.j. Wynn 17 June 2013

This one rocks too sissy! My heart goes out to you.

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Abhishek Mishra 17 June 2013

U writes of noble cause..may god bless u and hats off 2 u :)

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Vineet Chhikara 17 June 2013

A nice write... keep on writing on social issues....

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Aaron Lynn 16 June 2013

I enjoyed this one very much as well. I invite you to read and comment on some of mine!

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Poetheart Morgan 16 June 2013

I think i know what about is that poem. Very well written! ! ! ! Cry but never give up to try again! ! !

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Don Nguyen 16 June 2013

Hi Survi I read all your poems, sorry I don't like to comment on poem because I think they are all precious. This poem is so sad but so true. Men are made angels but they are capable of being animals. Keep on writing because you can cry for those helpless voiceless victims with your passionate plea. I will too by advocating love. Keep in touch. Peace,

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David Wood 16 June 2013

This has a strong message. Good work.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 June 2013

Great poem with a strong message. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Siya_! !

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