We cry
and try
then cry
and never try
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I believe, girls have to stop crying. It is time they did. They have to move away from the male hierarchy,
Well envisioned poem so nicely presented.Girls are powerful but situation sometimes makes them helpless. An intensive poem I like most. Many thanks Survi, keep the ball rolling.- - - 10
ahh a nice topic i would say and agree with you that girls are just said to be worshiped but the reality lies somewhere else....
sad reference to girls. great poem. everyone deserves respect.
An excellent poem. As a fellow human being I can understand the pain and the anguish that grills us from within. If you find time read my latest posting entitled 'An Introspection' and post your comments.
Splendidly written..could feel the pain..voices to be raised.
It's a cry voice against injustice. Fairness is required. It's a nice and simple poem.
Don't have to worship, just respect. No one should be in a helpless situation. Touching words.
Nice poem dear. Yes we should respect the girls and women and to keep this fact in our mind that if we are today alive in this world is just becoz of women. Nice written, touches the heart. Keep it up
Nice poem dear. Yes we should respect the girls and women and to keep this fact in our mind that if we are today alive in this world is just becoz of women. Nice written, touches the heart. Keep it up
I enjoyed this one very much as well. I invite you to read and comment on some of mine!
I think i know what about is that poem. Very well written! ! ! ! Cry but never give up to try again! ! !
Hi Survi I read all your poems, sorry I don't like to comment on poem because I think they are all precious. This poem is so sad but so true. Men are made angels but they are capable of being animals. Keep on writing because you can cry for those helpless voiceless victims with your passionate plea. I will too by advocating love. Keep in touch. Peace,
Great poem with a strong message. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Siya_! !
Part 2. Contd… shun male chauvinism, get educated and earn a living of their own. Marriage and bearing children of the men who do not respect them, is not Life. There is a life outside. They have to find it and live it.