Girls Comments

although I personally disagree, this was an amazing poem. An absolute 10/10 Ps. Maybe your just going for the wrong type of women

ha ha... think you got us all figured out hey.... either way you will pay :) I like the tsunami line - enjoy the ride!

Eh, what are you going to do? Everybody is a cliche, no? And men and women are opposites, some would argue compliments. Anyway, it was honest and it was clean cut so I liked it.

David, excellent poem - you are a man's man, my friend.

Oh I bet the women just love you for this one. I have rarely seen a greater condemnation. GW62

Hmmm David, David, a GREAT poem. HOWEVER I got something about the 'male species' I wasnt going to put out. But since you got yours I think the female point of view should be made. But still I feel your poems.

..you v sure penetrated well into womans mind, ....bigotry you say, ...you couldn t possibly find a better word...

Yet another fine write my friend...I'm becoming quite a fan...(I'll be expecting DeSantis key-rings to be advertised on here soon) ..just make sure they've a bottle opener on them...mines worn out ;) Great job..but I'm at a loss when it comes to understanding these remarkable species also.. all the best Jon

You might be right but then wrong at the same time, good poem

The secret is David, never try to understand us women, good write, made me smile, Lynda xx

Girls don't change easily their ideas. Sometimes their way of espressing themselves is very various. Their..their..it's better to share something more with women and so to use the adjective: our.

dear david, this line is unique With the heart of an open ocean strangely the poem sounds like a dialogue.

Hello poet David. Another very good poem, great work! LC

that is very wrong. not all girls are like that.

I am torn between defending my kind and rolling on the floor laughing. I'll grudgingly hand it to you- great read, David.

I DO know that I shouldn't be smiling or nodding. t x

Of course, males are so predictable, atren't they? They marry and work to support wife and family and die sooner than their spouses, who linger to spend the insurance money in Florida! Parable knows what she's doing dating exotic dancers! And why not, she's free and libertine!

Yeah we're emotional, unpredictable.... but that's what makes the mystery of us so alluring! ! ! HG: -) xx

I've went out with a few exotic dancers and it's not really the best idea.