I saw you there in desperate need
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A poem filled with compassion, I hope when all was said and done there were happy times to come. Excellent write Lisa, a big (10) from me---Melvina---
Lisa This poem is as Duncan says it is a poem of awesome proportions, a fine poem written by a fine person who feels more for other people than herself, a truely brilliant poem. cheers Sylvie.
A poem of awesome proportions, the sheer delight in knowing that we can be of a service that helps others, you have written this with much feeling and you sound like a wonderful friend to know Love Duncan X
.. Lisa, I just gave you 10 Full Points for this wonderful poem and I wish I could give you more. The words that you write indicate to the reader that you are a person of Divine Talent and also, a very compassionate Human Being. Thank you for sharing and I hope this story had a happy ending! Take care! Kindest regards, Deanna xx ..
well writen poem on internet friends, they can help you to have a better day. Thats what internet friends do for you.
Lisa, the compassion shine through this gem. I hope they found the daughter they were looking for. It brought back fond memories of the first time I spoke to my brother who I never knew I had. It is a long story I will tell you sometime. Beautifully written poem. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David