Saturday, March 28, 2015

Girl Power Comments

Rating: 4.3

Never underestimate the mind of girls.
Yes, our emotions have a million swirls,
but we are strong!
Never doubt us, we're never wrong.
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Crystal Pierce
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Bri Edwards 08 November 2016

i just read my previous comment AND [FOR THE FIRST TIME I THINK, 'cause i rarely return to a poem to see if the poet responds; i like it when poets send a response (to my comment) to me as a PH message] your response. no need to be sowwy. (does that mean i made you feel like a female pig?) (ha ha) i was not at all offended by anything you wrote. maybe some of my silliness made you think i WAS... offended. - - - - - - - - - - - - Maybe the guy, who you say only picked on girls, was actually flirting and TRYING to pick up a girl(friend) ? ? ? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 04 April 2015

i really like it when a poet takes the time to leave a poet's note, especially if it answers questions which i would have after reading the poem. thanks! I try to not underestimate (or overestimate) the power of a person’s mind. looks and behavior can be deceiving. oh! do girls have minds also! ? heh heh hee-hee ha ha I like the rhyming and that you settled for some rhymes which work well for understanding but are not quite what I would call “perfect rhymes” (they don’t all end in exactly-rhyming sounds) . well done. ok, well YOU KNOW you are teasing us with “we’re never wrong”! I like that you wrote TRY to not fall apart. but WHO “hates” the thoughts? you girls, or the “boys” or? yes, girls have plans, but I hope you have learned (two years later) that sometimes boys DO HAVE PLANS! ALSO I liked repeated “Girl Power”. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Crystal Pierce 12 October 2015

Sometimes when I look back on this comment I think I might have struck a nerve... sowwy: -/

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Crystal Pierce 30 March 2015

Haha thanks guys, and I did Soul Watcher

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Soul Watcher 30 March 2015

Lol! nice and so funny poem, I really like it.. But of course not all the same, Yes I agree alot of them, but not the all. It's a very wonderful poem, thank you for sharing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 28 March 2015

:) good done, Christya.. ans send a copy to that guy.. ;)

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