Tuesday, February 12, 2019

Girl On The Street Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a girl on the street
A child, not more than five
Her feet are bare, clothes a ragged affair,
And her hair unkempt.
...
Read full text

Apurva Prabhudesai
COMMENTS
Dennis Ryan 11 May 2023

This is the poem of yours I like best because you are able to get to and reveal the soul of this poor, little girl. Well done!

1 0 Reply

Thank you so much!

0 0
Jazib Kamalvi 02 March 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Apurva P. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

0 0 Reply

Thanks a lot!

0 0
Close
Error Success