Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Girl On Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

It started with an ember
That grew into a coal
And with a breath of wind
A flame consumed my soul
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Destry Drew Miller
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Captain Cur 14 July 2012

Until you get that flaming poetry under control you won't be boarding my ship anytime soon. Loved the cadence, and the fiery end. Ok, you can come aboard, just bring an extinguisher!

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Valerie Dohren 11 July 2012

Wonderful poetry, love the theme and very well written.

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